Nope, this isn't right.
If this is supposed to be rap, it needs something more:-
1. The singer needs to repeat his name several times before starting
2. The singer needs to boast constantly about how much money he has
3. The singer needs to boast about the size of his car and the number of gadgets it has
4. The singer needs to boast about his sexual prowess
I'm sure somebody can come up with suitable extra lyrics to sort this out! Come on, I challenge ye!